There is increasing awareness of eco tourism which save Envirnment, local culture agree or disagree ?
There is increasing awareness of eco tourism which save Envirnment, local culture. Government also encouring eco tourism which having scientic foudation. There are few organisms which are doing marketing in terms of eco tourisum, however they are disturbing local culture. Apart from eco tourism, there are other tourism also which are nature based, green travel, adventure travel. Potential traveler have to choose right tourism whose not doing only marketing but it should be truely potential eco tourism.
There are many news says that climate change are due to human activity. Many have disagreement for same and they want evidence. Well, there are evidence says this is due to our industrial development. Result says, since 200 years there is increasing in land and sea temperature in northen hemisphere due to harmful gases. Also southern hemisphere got effected due to our industrial development. So, this is the proof that due to our industrial delelpment and harmful gases temperature is rising.
use of technology heart student work assign essay teacher checked real person. software by university . 600 used study. computer is ok. contraviture
ind-species, killed. nos shark descres. imp. growing popu. food source. also other fish going. shark dont get produced. few new shark. long 3 year. dying out
family tree. history. chart individual people. geneality. reaching back 100 years. evidence happen in many word. wealthy family history recoreded. reaserch publish. not earier.
debatge why human fire. south africa, early evidence 300 year earlier. multifire evidence. why using fire. proved cook meet. tost bone in fire
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 417, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ely potential eco tourism. There are many news says that climate change are due t...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...ely potential eco tourism. There are many news says that climate change are due to hum...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...orthen hemisphere due to harmful gases. Also southern hemisphere got effected due to...
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Suggestion: Use
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Suggestion: Software
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Suggestion: Computer
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Suggestion: Ind-species
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Suggestion: Nos
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Suggestion: Imp
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Suggestion: Growing
...pecies, killed. nos shark descres. imp. growing popu. food source. also other fish goin...
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Suggestion: Food
.... nos shark descres. imp. growing popu. food source. also other fish going. shark do...
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Suggestion: Also
...escres. imp. growing popu. food source. also other fish going. shark dont get produc...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...escres. imp. growing popu. food source. also other fish going. shark dont get produc...
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Line 8, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Shark
...pu. food source. also other fish going. shark dont get produced. few new shark. long ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...od source. also other fish going. shark dont get produced. few new shark. long 3 yea...
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Suggestion: Few
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Suggestion: Long
...shark dont get produced. few new shark. long 3 year. dying out family tree. his...
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Suggestion: Dying
...t produced. few new shark. long 3 year. dying out family tree. history. chart in...
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Suggestion: Family
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Suggestion: History
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Suggestion: Chart
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Suggestion: Geneality
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Suggestion: Reaching
...ry. chart individual people. geneality. reaching back 100 years. evidence happen in many...
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Suggestion: Evidence
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun word seems to be countable; consider using: 'many words'.
Suggestion: many words
...hing back 100 years. evidence happen in many word. wealthy family history recoreded. reas...
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Suggestion: Wealthy
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Suggestion: Reaserch
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Suggestion: Not
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Suggestion: Debatge
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Suggestion: Multifire
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Suggestion: Why
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Suggestion: Proved
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Suggestion: Tost
...ence. why using fire. proved cook meet. tost bone in fire
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53754940711 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57327665507 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691699604743 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 12.6551724138 245% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 8.0 20.5024630542 39% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3455167674 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 45.1935483871 104.977214359 43% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.16129032258 20.9669160288 39% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.61290322581 7.25397266985 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 36.0 5.33497536946 675% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 23.0 2.91625615764 789% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222141435633 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369362074136 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118843203338 0.071462118173 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689494215329 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147416778482 0.0609392437508 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 12.6369458128 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 5.2 10.3980295567 50% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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