The time people devote in the job leaves very little time for personal life how wide spread is the problem? What problem will the shortage of time cause?
The problem of the time people devote in the job leaves very little time for personal life which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is hazardous while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that people are very busy in their work and they do not have enough time to spend with their family. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that if they do not spend time with their family it put bad impact on their relationship. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of this trend.
On the other hand, this is very serious problem which is faced by people in their daily life. Besides, if a person is healthy they can do any work and it is very helpful for them. For example, mostly people very busy in their work and they are not able to spend time with family.
According to the argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the problem of time devote in the job leaves very little time for personal life can successfully addressed, provided that the above stated measures are taken.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...time for personal life can successfully addressed, provided that the above stated measure...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72200772201 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40437951065 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498069498069 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7373225119 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.181818182 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352991819334 0.242375264174 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133838344143 0.0925447433944 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136191040943 0.071462118173 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246133025047 0.151781067708 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923015031895 0.0609392437508 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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