Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.

What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Submitted by gadhagi on Wed, 02/14/2018 - 04:37

In recent year’s it has been noticed that tourists are getting more interested in visiting unexplored places such as the Sahara desert and the Antarctic. It cannot be denied that these extreme places do come with several difficulties for these tourists, but on the other hand these locations do also provide a source of experiencing an unmatchable beauty to them.

Tourists from all across the world visit these locations which offer multitude of picturesque views, biodiversity and wildlife which they will remember for their lifetime. For an instance, watching a polar bear in the Antarctic in its natural habitat is truly a moment which every tourists would love to experience. Tourists at these extreme locations experience solitude which is not possible to get at a destination which is very common among tourist which are too chaotic.

With several benefits, these locations do have their own limits and disadvantages as well. For an example, locations such as the Antarctic and the Sahara desert could have severly low level of oxygen, snow storm, sand storm, limited food supplies, lack of network coverage, isolation and negligible medical facilities. At times tourists may suffer sever frost bites which may cause threat to life. Before planning their journey to these difficult places tourists are recommended to get their medical examination done.

On the total, these beautiful places like the Sahara desert and the Antarctic do come with harsh conditions for the tourists, but they tend to focus on what is beyond these difficulties. With proper planning and calculated risk, the journey of these tourists to these extreme places would truly be the most beautiful experience of their life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30036630037 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68018250914 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553113553114 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6170411765 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.545454545 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264523938309 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111651364455 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102303329952 0.071462118173 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167950614596 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563174079273 0.0609392437508 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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