Tourism is becoming popular these days due to various reasons.Some people think that it support economy of the countries Whereas, others believe that it has negative impact on the natural environment.This essay will discuss both of these, how tourism brings wealth to countries and why it is damaging natural resorts.
There are myriad arguments in favor of tourism.One of the most conspicuous is it pump-in money by creating jobs.In particular, it supports hotels and transportation industry.For example, A meticulous research study conducted by eminent scientists of the University of Australia shows that number of employment in service industry is positively correlated with tourist coming in for the visit.Thus, tourism is supporting and building stronger the economies.
On the other hand, one of the pivotal arguments against is people who come in to tourism do not care much for the environment.In particular, they through plastic bottles and other packaging materials which is harmful for pristine condition.For instance, a longitudinal study conducted by prominent researchers claim that pollution exponentially rises as number of tourist grows.In fact, they are directly proportional.
This essay discussed how tourists, money and environment are interrelated. In conclusion, with proper social awareness, the benefits of tourism can outweigh the drawback.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82673267327 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22053579377 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658415841584 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.5024630542 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.831160917 50.4703680194 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 235.4 104.977214359 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.4 20.9669160288 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.4 7.25397266985 281% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0629332213332 0.242375264174 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353463021262 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234682119255 0.071462118173 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0393994048845 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108054406895 0.0609392437508 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 12.6369458128 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 53.1260098522 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 10.9458128079 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.42 11.5310837438 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.56 8.32886699507 139% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.94827586207 302% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.3980295567 173% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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