Nowadays, towns and cities are developing and this development brings fruitful changes to the community. Some people have opinion that shopping plazas should supersede local shops. It is the most subjective matter today and people talk about that much. I personally agree with the above statement and will elaborate it in the following paragraphs before reaching to a reasoned conclusion.
At the out set, there are number of arguments associated with the replacement of shopping centres to small shops. Firstly, variety of things are available for people under one roof such as groceries, food court, clothing, books which saves the time of people. However, these malls provide an opportunity for number of people for jobs such as customer service and waiting staff at a restaurant. For example, I am a university student and I worked in a grocery shop as a counter staff.
Moreover, huge parking facility and play area for kids attracts more people towards welcoming trend of shopping malls. However, people should need not to worry abut bargaining for things as prices are fixed. Furthermore, cinemas are also the part of plazas which give quality time between families and friends.
Overall, I think that benefits of shopping malls are too great no one can ignore that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worry'?
Suggestion: worry
... malls. However, people should need not to worry abut bargaining for things as prices ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16826923077 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60219649339 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668269230769 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.253882591 50.4703680194 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.5833333333 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190100181783 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657374319353 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632619099454 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108617882837 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270792475514 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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