In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree
The issue which frequently generates a great deal of heated debate in town and cities, is that the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop and the problem is certainly discussed in contemporary world. Many academics contend that large shopping mall should replace small shops. this essay will express the complete agreement with this notion and will justify my viewpoint.
To commence with, there are wide range of arguments to support the aforementioned statement however, the most conspicuous one lies in, fact is not remote or complicated, but accessible and practical. it has long been considered perfectly justified by proponents to assume that large shopping malls save our time. Furthermore, it is asserted that they have a variety of stores for one to buy all their daily needs from under one roof. A classic example of this occurring is statistics revealed by UN clearly demonstrates that approximately sixty of the nations worldwide prefer to follow this trend.
Another convincing fact to ascertain this it is convenience of getting our daily needs including groceries, clothes, shoes, books etc under one roof. Besides, it seems incontrovertible that shopping malls are less expensive than other shops. A relevant example is nations world over have observed a dramatic shift in the opinion of public regarding this issue.
In the view of argument discussed above, it is my considered opinion that advantages overweight the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35775862069 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90159851286 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9545214045 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258717162719 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103085544916 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158335926302 0.071462118173 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138948046441 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168755007269 0.0609392437508 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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