What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
The benefits of urban living and drawbacks of rural living have been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of living in cities and villages through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I will try to enunciate the advantages of urban life and disadvantages of village life with some solution to overcome the disadvantages of rural life.
One of the most prominent reasons of urban life is that people get all the opportunities in one place. For example, people do not need to travel for jobs, education, medicines and other daily needs far away from their home. Furthermore, people can get the best schools and colleges, universities for their children. In addition, when we live in cities, we can save our travelling time as we can get all the things at one place.
On the other hand, when we live in a rural area has some drawbacks. We have lack of education, transportation, hospitals in countryside. Moreover, the villagers are not open minded and they interfere in others life. In addition, in village we cannot be free to do what we want to do.
Apparently the problems of rural area can be solved if young generation will teach the older people about the changes in new world. Moreover, government also can help to overcome the problems by providing good schools, hospitals.
While on the hand, there are people who will continue to wrangling about the facts of urban and rural lives. I would like to conclude that living in a city has more benefits than rural area. But the rural area problems can be solved. It is totally up to individuals where they want to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 31.9359605911 163% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 316.0 242.827586207 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79113924051 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7671621471 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537974683544 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1506457114 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0588235294 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333301998261 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113138096472 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116865993544 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192482934705 0.151781067708 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105560289819 0.0609392437508 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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