Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
There is no doubt, that food is an essential part of living for human lives and most fundamental need of preparing the food is to fulfill basic human need: hunger. Undoubtedly, due to latest inventions in a market, nowadays preparing food become much easier compared to the olden days. Because of this fact, I agree that people spend less time preparing food and can utilize this time in other professional tasks
On the one hand, in the olden days mainly women are responsible for preparing food, and they need to spend several hours for preparing the foods, as they are using kerosene stove which is bit difficult to operate and take longer time. Due to this fact, they are left with very less time to spare for their personal lives. Whereas, on other hand, nowadays there are lots of new technology options available in the market, which can make the food faster and very easily. Rice cooker, for example can cook the rice in 10 minutes, compared to a normal cooker which normally takes half an hour and we need to keep check manually, whether rice is being cooked or not. Furthermore, there is advanced cooking machine available, such as micro oven which can also cook the food by simply pressing some buttons. Moreover, due to invention of refrigerator, you can also keep leftover food of yesterday to be used for today meal. This also saves time, as some people cook in a more quantity and use that food for 1-2 days. Because of these technologies, definitely people have more time and they can use their time in a better and professional way in other activities such as reading, watching television and talking to their dear ones on the phone.
Quick food has become very popular in this 21st century and there are lots of restaurants and fast food stalls available all over the cities, which omits the needs of cooking. Mainly students studying in a college and people living alone from their home make more use of this facility for their living. Though, indubitably eating outside daily leads to bad health and because of this, young generation is suffering from obesity.
To recapitulate, the improved way of cooking provides people nowadays to save time and cook in more efficient manner. This leads to spend time in more important things and they can live a life without much hassle.
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Thanks sir, i am little
Thanks sir,
i am little confuse about these lines
(On the one hand, in the olden days mainly women are responsible for preparing food, and they need to spend several hours for preparing the foods, as they are using kerosene stove which is bit difficult to operate and take longer time. Due to this fact, they are left with very less time to spare for their personal lives)
as in these lines i mentioned about the past so whether are should be replace with were or its fine to write are.and i wrote foods, is that ok or it should replaced with food.
One more question which I have is, for below statement what is the best phrase to replace this sentence
"Rice cooker, for example can cook the rice in 10 minutes, compared to a normal cooker which normally take half an hour and we need to keep check manually, whether rice is been cooked or not"
Here you have given comment that rice is been cooked is not correct, so what is the correct verb here to replace.
Thanks
'Food' is a non-countable
'Food' is a non-countable noun when it refers to food in general. When discussing specific foods, for example, different national cuisines, or a listing of various foods in a person's diet, 'foods' is countable.
so here 'food' is OK.
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whether rice has been cooked or not
or: whether rice is being cooked or not
Thanks sir. Dear Sir, I have
Thanks sir.
Dear Sir,
I have updated my essay by correcting the above mistakes which u have mentioned.can you please rate my essay again.
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A little bit better, but the
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a normal cooker which normally take half an hour
a normal cooker which normally takes half an hour
definitely people has more time
definitely people have more time
in a better and professional ways
in a better and professional way
in better and professional ways
Sentence: Rice cooker, for example can cook the rice in 10 minutes, compared to a normal cooker which normally take half an hour and we need to keep check manually, whether rice is been cooked or not.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb 'to be', past participle
Suggestion: Refer to is and been
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Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 399 350
No. of Characters: 1851 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.469 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.639 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.321 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.647 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.359 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.543 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5