Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

Submitted by sappu on Mon, 06/12/2017 - 11:44

One of the important thing in a man's day to day life is food, which helps humans to perform several tasks. Preparing food is the most complicated and time taking task in early days but at present the situation has totally reversed by the invention of new electronic goods which assisted in preparation of food. Additionally, it also increased interest in many males to cook whereas, in olden days this task was only done by females. It altered the situation.

Firstly, introduction of new appliances such as electric rice cookers, microwave ovens, bread toasters etc made life easy in preparation of food. To give a clear view, in olden days people depend on wood, kerosene to prepare rice. However, this situation has changed over a period by introduction of electric rice cookers by using these cookers preparation of rice became simple. Moreover this also helped in saving the time.

Another point to consider is that in ancient days cooking is the responsibility of women while increasing interest in male due to simplified methods in preparing food made men to cook. For instance, in India many instant foods are introduced in 20th century few of them are Maggie, cup noodles. The main reason behind introduction of these foods is due a vast number of men working at early hours in morning do not find a time to have their breakfast as a result of instant noodles now it takes only 2 minutes to prepare. These instant foods made food preparation flexible.

Thirdly, students who are living single and do not know how to cook, have their food in canteen, restaurants etc where food is expensive and regular eating in these places may also lead to health problems, which are related to stomach. In order to overcome this situation they should learn how to cook, as this being simple learnt by watching videos on Internet. For example in India more than half of the stomach related health issues are cause due to intake of outside food.

In conclusion, latest introduction of kitchen appliances reduced the burden in cooking and additionally saved the time taken for preparation, the saved time can be used for doing work related to profession. Instant foods which lead to prepare food quick. Preparing food at home not only saves money but also health.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cookers'' or 'cooker's'?
Suggestion: cookers'; cooker's
...of electric rice cookers by using these cookers preparation of rice became simple. More...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...kers preparation of rice became simple. Moreover this also helped in saving the time. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...f men working at early hours in morning dont find a time to have their breakfast as ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...dly, students who are living single and dont know how to cook, have their food in ca...
^^^^
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...intake of outside food. In conclusion, latest introduction of kitchen appliances redu...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, third, thirdly, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91122715405 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60521298291 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553524804178 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7450554848 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142777951693 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492292208856 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216442500908 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833526868395 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164349342973 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cookers'' or 'cooker's'?
Suggestion: cookers'; cooker's
...of electric rice cookers by using these cookers preparation of rice became simple. More...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...kers preparation of rice became simple. Moreover this also helped in saving the time. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...f men working at early hours in morning dont find a time to have their breakfast as ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...dly, students who are living single and dont know how to cook, have their food in ca...
^^^^
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...intake of outside food. In conclusion, latest introduction of kitchen appliances redu...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, third, thirdly, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91122715405 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60521298291 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553524804178 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7450554848 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142777951693 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492292208856 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216442500908 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833526868395 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164349342973 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.