What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural? What are the problems of living in rural areas and how it can be solved?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typically day revels life style of urban area and rural area has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain; regarding this I would say it is happening mainly due to benefits of living in big cities and the problems of rural areas and can be should by implementing discussed in the essay
To begin with, I would say number of facilities in big cities, big advantages to peoples those living in cities medical facilities, high standard doctors, no of hospital are there and so on. Urban people’s life style goes high standard like big houses, expensive cars and good jobs. Moreover education facilities gives to children upgrade schools and collages high professional teachers.
On the other hands in rural areas no medical facilities, no doctors. Sometimes government employee comes to villages and gives temporary treatment to peoples. If we talk about the standard of living is very poor small and mud house, no food facilities, no opportunities to jobs. Moreover if we talk about education. Education is not good in villages medium educate teachers no option of schools, no collages.
To conclude, urban area better than rural area . if the government understand rural areas also be developed as to compare cities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, as to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09401709402 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8138376302 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.2763606141 50.4703680194 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249092977039 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820514558437 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832139204301 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158785723414 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840127759333 0.0609392437508 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.