what is the best invention of last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics, the airplane, and explain why?
The importance of invention which was debatable has now become more contovertial. The substantial influence of computers, antibiotics, and airplane has sparked controversy over the potentials impact of this trend, on society in recent years. It can be said that, computer is considered as the most influencing invention, however, some people consider antibiotics and airplane as biggest invention. This essay will elaborate why computers has bought effect ways of doing work and why antibiotics and airplanes are can be a costly prepossession and thus, will come to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerable reasons why computer is a great invention, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that, computers have ability to solve complex issues. Example for instance, computer intelligence can help us work efficiently. Moreover, it can reduce work load and provide a large storage option ultimately saving trees cutdown for papers. Computer, thus is one of the most important invention in100 years.
Nevertheless, some people hold opposing view and believe antibiotics and airplane inventions are significant and have made more break throughs, as there are innumerable reason for that, but the most prominent one lies in the fact that, antibiotics and airplane are not affordable by common people. Example as an illustration, antibiotics are still considers as lethal if overdosed and further research is ongoing till date, and there has been fertilise due to excess dose. Additionally, airplanes charge enormous amount of money when purchasing tickets. Therefore, it can be said antibiotics and airplane are lethal and costly respectively.
For what has been said above, it can be concluded that, computer invention are positive and is prominent, but antibiotics and airplane invention should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'trees'' or 'tree's'?
Suggestion: trees'; tree's
... large storage option ultimately saving trees cutdown for papers. Computer, thus is o...
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fertilised'.
Suggestion: fertilised
...s ongoing till date, and there has been fertilise due to excess dose. Additionally, airpl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52650176678 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03843369382 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2684708862 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.307692308 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104469016425 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429978022702 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555972146618 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735723513592 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343117784823 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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