what is the best invention of last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics, the airplane, and explain why?

Recently, the phenomenon of inventions has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question" What is the best invention of last 100 years?". Whereas it is a widely held view that computers and antibiotics, as well as airplanes, are highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.

From the cultural-historical standpoint, innovations are bound up inextricably with the society's welfare, which indicates they lead to both convenience and well-being. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between the invention of electricity and overall welfare as well as an exponential increase in the socioeconomic status. Researchers, nevertheless, paid heed to the telephone invention and the airplane's first design alike. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of being chosen as the most effective invention is correlated positively with not only the impact factor on the individual life but also the society's overall status.

Within the realm of technology, without the slightest doubt, electricity attribute to the semiconductor industry, in that it would come down to the television and the mobile phones. A salient example of such attribution is electronic-based circuits, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take the electromagnetic field for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint the research and development problems. Besides, this criterion is an indispensable part of modern lifestyle. Hence it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of devising novel models.

To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes" All's well that ends well", after analyzing what elaborated above I firmly believe that the electricity is the most important invention.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...indispensable part of modern lifestyle. Hence it is reasonable to infer the pivotal r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72508591065 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47050116178 2.71678728327 128% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 139.433497537 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656357388316 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7853536477 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.833333333 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115005951105 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345683695398 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622876149195 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715259913723 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799675576214 0.0609392437508 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 55.0591133005 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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