What is the Pressing problem worlds government is facing at the moment and what impact it has on its inhabitants and planet? Give solutions.
One of the most conspicuous trend of today’s contemporary era is global warming . Global warming is an important issue which needs immediate attention. To irradiate global warming, government and people need to work collaboratively. This essay will discuss, issue arising as a result of global warming and solutions to overcome it.
To commence with, global warming is obviously a result of population growth. To satisfy needs of growing population, resources are being overused. To illustrate, industrial pollution, deforestation, greenhouse gases caused increase in global temperatures, sea- level rise, as well as excess carbon monoxide emissions. Consequently, world government and it’s citizenry are facing major health risk due to global warming.
Furthermore, to irradiate global warming coherent steps should be adapted. Government regulations and lifestyle changes by people can improve global warming issue. In other words, high taxes towards products that creat negative externalities, improved recycling methods, energy saving- especially by turning off light, gas, air-conditioning can reduce the effect of global warming. Hence, government initiative and people’s attitudes can save the world from adverse effect of global warming.
In recapitulation, this essay discussed reasons for global warming and solutions to overcome challenges caused by it. In my view, government bodies working collectively with citizens can defect the effect of global warming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, as a result, as well as, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08056872038 5.00649968141 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17789778845 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644549763033 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2784314592 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6428571429 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.25397266985 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0610126098322 0.242375264174 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0272935843291 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339694619969 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441169190662 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00836934950041 0.0609392437508 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 53.1260098522 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.39 11.5310837438 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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