In this day and age computers became an essential thing in our living.Although some people claim that the computer made us less productive, unhappy and more foolish than before with lack of knowledge in information.
In this essay, I would discuss benefit that computers brought to our world and why I agree with them.
to begin with, there are various reasons with advantages of this smart device that have high positive effects in the world.
first and foremost, by advances in medical technologies the speed of detection and treatment of diseases became faster, also attendance in surgeries and operations increased new outfits and appliances.
for example, today, computer systems, a specialist could do an operation in a country on a patient in another country.
Another point of these advantages is increasing speed and accuracy in computing and communication systems in banking. Calculating customer accounts and the relation between banks have been faster and safer.
For example, a recent scientific research conducted with Tehran University researchers in 2016 has shown swap in banking highly enhanced in last decade.
In addition to the intelligence, constructing these systems is a point of productivity in human.
in conclusion, the advantages of the computer have been impressive on industrial, medical, economic advances, also in other context and my personal sentiment is that the computers made us faster on works, more intelligent and pleased than the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99290466071 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1685057153 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156298668086 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566270675253 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440357602651 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602356398639 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454568362727 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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