Whether design if building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work.
The importance of design of building which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is the beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad which will further elaborate this argument but one of the most preponderant one stems from the fact that benefits can be attributed to the design of the building. Consequently, people working in the well designed building feel proud and have a positive attitude towards the work. Another pivotal aspect of this trend building will have a far reaching positive effect when it comes to one’s psychological need. Needless to say , all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that penetration of natural sources such as air sunlight in the building can have the tremendous effects on the workforce. Besides, unlike the electric light and air-condition air, the maximum touch of natural sources keep away an inevitable diseases which are immensely important for the people. Hence, it is apparent why many are favor of this trend.
According to the aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of design of building are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...os;s psychological need. Needless to say , all these merits stand in a good stead....
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Line 7, column 330, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'disease'?
Suggestion: disease
...natural sources keep away an inevitable diseases which are immensely important for the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, so, thus, well, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16535433071 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79081263082 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1974479916 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249734457802 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876491267133 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100024730029 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14136886113 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089840516743 0.0609392437508 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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