Which should require more financial support from the government? Health or education? To what extent do you agree or not. Use your experience.
Health and Education play vital role both should require for the society equally. In my point of view the more concern is Health due to changes of environment, food, day to day activities for the human being. I shall explain detailly in the following paragraphs.
Education is one of the part of human it is not necessary that everyone should need to survive, even some uneducated can survive in this world like driver, painter, plumber and farmers etc., But, health is very important to live happily, most of the people are prone to get early disease now a days due unhealthy food, lack of exercises and environmental pollution etc., The WHO (world health organization) recently release the article that more than 10 million people were died due to heart attack and stroke since 2009.
The Government should support financially more for the society by constructing new hospitals in the rural area, they are still lacking in their health facilities. They need to travel more distance for emergencies due to the fact that people are dying. Should invest in a highly equipped machine to treat various advanced complicated conditions like cancer and brain damage. Increasing new medical benefits not only for the old age people but even for younger people now they are also suffering various health issues.
I concluded that health is more important than education. At the same time people should take steps for exercise and proper food to maintain good health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01646090535 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54015825013 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609053497942 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 129.272773622 50.4703680194 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.9 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 7.25397266985 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173567838646 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778073537385 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612994083061 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111421865509 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218061398127 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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