Over the past few decades, world's governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues, there is a high degree of ambivalence over this matter and people are coming up with the different problems, but I believe that global warming and increasing pollution is the biggest pressing problem. This essay will further elaborate reasons to support this notion and then will present a logical solution.
To begin with, There are myriads of reasons to support this notion but one of the most compelling reason is that Global warming possesses multiple threat, including increasing sea level, sudden climate change, shortage of drinkable water resources. Another cogent reason is Global warming is caused by the increase rate of industrialization usage of heavy machinery. This also pollutes the environment and also causes the Global warming.
In my opinion, solutions to this problem would be to switch to renewable energy and a reduction in the usage of fossil fuel. apart from that, the Government should make the strict policy to protect the environment and not based on the economic advantage of it. On the other side, the organization should also contribute to protecting the environment, they need to realize that making the profit should not be the sole purpose, the environment we live in is our responsibilities.
In Conclusion, I would like to recapitulate that global warming and pollutions are the most pressing problem for the inhabitants of our planet and all individual including the government bodies and organizations need to realize and contribute to curing this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Apart
... reduction in the usage of fossil fuel. apart from that, the Government should make t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, apart from, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29133858268 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97950092379 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562992125984 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5807892617 50.4703680194 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.333333333 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.9669160288 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179465641484 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652914117331 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860989923379 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120772084962 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963979906567 0.0609392437508 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 53.1260098522 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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