Over the past few years, there has been a debate over this matter where people believe that some people are born with the creativity and specific talents and others are not. Whereas, there are some other people who claimed that creativity and specific talents can be taught. I believe that people born in the talented family always have an edge over the other children. This essay will further discuss both the points and then deduce a logical conclusion.
To begin with, People who are born in the talented family carry the same DNA, also they gets the environment which helps their creitivity and specific talent. For Example, it has been seen that children of the artist are often choose to become artist. This happens because these people gets this environment from their childhood, which help in early development of their creativity. So it can be said that some people are really born with creativity.
On the other side, some people say that creativity can be taught, and a child can become a good sports person or musician. This seems true but without a faveourable environment teaching would become hard. For Example, it has been seen that people with more money and resources often surpassed by the people who were born with the special talent but didn't had the same resources.
After analyzing the above facts, I would like to recapitulate that, people are born with the creativity and specific talent, eventhough some talent can be taught but it is hard for them to surpass the people who are born with the talent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, whereas, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86259541985 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32248066481 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507633587786 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2466895813 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291139895289 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127463151731 0.0925447433944 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993456439623 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20348165465 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657836298692 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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