Write about Climate change? who is responsible whether Government or industries?why
Climate change is formidable truth which has severe consequences on our life. Both government and Industries have the infamous role in such disaster to occur. Though I have more inclination towards blaming Government for their lack of responsibilities which caused inevitable suffering to human life and I will do that analysis throughout this essay.
Climate changes are majorly happening because of Government leniency towards it. We know how the developed nations are performing the nuclear tests to dominate the developing countries with their uncontrollable power. With the frequent occurrence of such tests, they are not only threatening the other nations but also generating the threat for themselves because the nuclear tests are disturbing the ecosystem and causing harmful effect on global warming. For an instance, the natural calamities held more frequent than ever before which clearly indicate the harmful climatic changes.Therefore I believe that each nation Government such take concrete actions to control such horrible climate changes.
However, industries are also one of the important players in destroying the environment. Industries waste disposal inspire water and air pollution and both are definitely enough for dangerous climate changes. For an instance, in India and China, the meteorological instruments has recorded air quality as dangerous and unhealthy for human life. Also, it cultivates the emergence of diseases such as Lung and Skin cancer etc.
The conclusion is, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that Government must consider such climate changes as threat to mankind and must take substantial actions to improve it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01219742602 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9669708403 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173705431332 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682515281871 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582490856726 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107475924607 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359511481291 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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