xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals?
Recently, the phenomenon of xenophobia and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that a fear of losing identity is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that a fear of the unfamiliar can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a fear toward foreigners standpoint, foreign culture can provide the society with noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that foreign language, as well as a patriot, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which deciphered the stigmatization. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both a social stigma and the social interaction are seen.
Within the realm of discriminatory attitude, refugees might increase the consequences of the migration. Moreover, fundamental aspects of hostility relate to this reality that the demerits of racism pertain to being isolated from society. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertook by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of 45% deprived of the society is correlated negatively with ethnocentrism. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of strangers.
To conclude, while three are several compelling arguments of both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the different country migration far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of foreign culture prove the significance of cultural openness, but also pinpoints of cultural empathy implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61111111111 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33941244608 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9450698997 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0594533960008 0.242375264174 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.018971925141 0.0925447433944 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255740487017 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0313960968592 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246839642011 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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