Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends.
Migration has a long history in human being's civilization, even more. In this case, some travel willingly to explore the world, and some by force to save their lives. personally, I strongly support moving from one place to another for its tangible benefits one of which is acquiring first-hand knowledge. Looking in more detail, those who are living in developing countries probably do not have access to advanced science thereby going to developed countries to obtain advanced knowledge in their dream field of study. As a cooling example of this claim, my brother comes to my mind. Several years ago, he traveled to the USA to study Landscape architecture at one of the most prestigious universities worldwide. After 3 years of assiduous studying, he came back with a Ph.D. which is not offered in my country. As a result, had he not traveled to the US, he would not have received his Ph.D.
- The fossil record shows that members of the group of dinosaurs known as lambeosaurs had large bony crests on top of their heads The shape of the crests varied from species to species but all lambeosaur crests contained extended hollow passages No one real 86
- People think that increasing the use of computers and mobiles has a negative effect on young people s writing and reading skill Do you agree or disagree 73
- In a group project it is better to divide the project and everyone takes a part of that to do lonely or the whole group does the project together which one do you prefer 73
- The Northern Pacific sea star which is native to the coasts of Japan Korea and China has recently appeared thousands of kilometers away Because this sea star now threatens to harm marine ecosystems in new and distant areas scientists are currently investi 81
- Scientists have long believed that bees existed up to some 200 million years ago This notion has recently come under some speculation because of a lack of any significant evidence to support this theory Key missing evidence includes fossil records the lac 90
flaws:
examples are too long. need more arguments
---------------------------------------------------
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 5
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 9
No. of Words: 154 150
No. of Characters: 722 900
No. of Different Words: 107 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.523 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.688 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.696 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 49 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 42 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.739 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.143 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.41 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.41 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 1