Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Visiting the museums is the best way to learn about a country

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Visiting the museums is the best way to learn about a country.

As we know quite well , visiting museums are efficient means to learn about history of a country .Some museums are located in the center of the city because it is a symbol for this city . Moreover, some museums are regarded as a sacred palace for one country, such as Egypt nation Museum where you could see the mummy .Hence , numerous people claims that visiting museums is a best way to be familiar with one country. However, it is exaggerated to say that, in my opinion, because we have a large quantities of method to be acquainted about certain country.

Admittedly, some museums have many ancient relics or original handmade drafts for teenagers to understand the background of items .However , we actually can not understand the culture in these ancient antique since we could not obtain important information and essential spirit which the inventors or poets authentically would like to express merely by this way . If we just have hot the appearance of a relics or item , we might only gain some thing on the surface , but the inner meaning or essence will be lost by merely visiting museums to comprehend history of a country. So visiting museums are not probable the most intelligent way for us.

First of all , compared to visiting the small museum in the country , visiting a country and live there for a whole could be a wiser choice for people getting knowledge , custom , culture and interesting stuff about a country .In common , even though the nation musemum of one country may equip a immense amount of ancient item or relic such as mummy , Roman building and Newton original material in Motion Laws , yet it is still a miniature place since people are not capable of feeling the atmosphere at that time .What' s more , most of them in the museum can not be touched by the traveler .if people even could not look in deep and go deep sight for a antique, let alone the culture and spirits it have. Hence , should we go to the real place where the antique would be create , where the ancient building would be construct , and where the high-tech will be test, we would actually understand that why these item were invented at that time . Furthermore , by this way ,not only the much knowledge can we absorb , but also we go in to a deep sight in to the living style and thinking model of local people .Moreover, the ability of critical thinking which can not be cultivate only by visiting the museum is supposed to be adopted by visiting the real place.

Secondly , learning the background and the history from books or internet will save you not only money but also time . As people have limited energy and time to go through the museum , most of them can not be seen and be understood in a few day. In addition , the money spent on tickets can not be ignored especially for some little children or juveniles. In contrast , learning the knowledge about country from printed books or searching the resources about history of country could be a convenient and economic way to learn about a country . For example , in China, some museums are expensive to visit such as The Forbidden City . But numerous materials about the Forbidden City -------photos , text , or introduction --------are scattered on the internet . What you should do is to click the mouse , then a completed introduction including history , character and culture is showing up . Therefore, it is no doubt that visiting the museums directly is not the best way to learn about a country .

By and large , though visiting the museum is a gateway to be acquainted with the information about a country , but it absolutely not a best way for it .With progress of times and development with technology , divergent methods has appeared to help people know well about a country .

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Sentence: Moreover, some museums are regarded as a sacred palace for one country, such as Egypt nation Museum where you could see the mummy .Hence , numerous people claims that visiting museums is a best way to be familiar with one country.
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So visiting museums are not probable the most intelligent way for us.
So visiting museums are probably not the most intelligent way for us.

Sentence: By and large , though visiting the museum is a gateway to be acquainted with the information about a country , but it absolutely not a best way for it .With progress of times and development with technology , divergent methods has appeared to help people know well about a country .
Description: The token a is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to a and best

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