Do you agree or disagree with the statement: High school should take a course on basic economics.

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Do you agree or disagree with the statement: High school should take a course on basic economics.

As a student majors in finance, I can not agree more with the statement that the high school students should take a course on basic economics. Although many people may argue that the high school students take too much pressure for their various courses, I still hold the view that It's obvious favorable for them to take part in the economics class. I would like to explore my several primary ones as follows.

Firstly, the economic course must contribute to their solutions to the financial issue in their future. The financial issue is connected to every individual's life, for everyone needs to trade to support our life. However, due to their lack of economic knowledge, most people do not have the capacity to deal with their financial problems. Facing the due credit card or investment choice between kinds of bank's products, they get into the trouble. And they just come to recognize those difficulties when it occurs. For instance, my friend Mike, who is making efforts to take the course of economics during the weekends, he made the decision after he has worked 2 years, because he found out that he can not take good control of his capital, meanwhile, if he becomes capable of investment and planning, he will be wealthy.

Secondly, there is another reason that deserves more words here. Take our education into account, for one thing, the economics is considered too complicated for elementary or middle school students, for another, when students enter into the university they have to handle their major course as well as the internship, as preparation for their career, instead of the economics if that's not their major. Take my schoolmates Coco for example, he prefers to specialize in management while still interested in economics, he has planed to audit the economic class in the university when he was still in the high school, unfortunately, he realized that he don't have enough time at all, because of his heavy assignment and frequently club activity. Consequently, It's the high school students that deserve to take eonomicas course.

To draw my conclusion, I strongly recommend that high school open the subject of econommics for students as an elective course. I bet they will benefit a lot from that during their whole life.

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Sentence: Consequently, It's the high school students that deserve to take eonomicas course.
Error: eonomicas Suggestion: economics

Sentence: To draw my conclusion, I strongly recommend that high school open the subject of econommics for students as an elective course.
Error: econommics Suggestion: economics

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