Do you agree or disagree with the statement that in order to solve the problems of the present and the future ,people should review the past.
We are humen beings ,neither the god taking control of the world nor the sand without thinking.As human beings ,we have desire ,hence ,we face the problem. People's behavior varies confronting of difficuties,some make choice according to the sixth sense ,however,the others listen to the history.There's no doubt that I agree with the second one .Here listed several reasons support my view.
First of all, the past is the process of learning from which we accumulate the experience.I can give you the experiment of learning as an example before hand. We already know that the dog would slobber when they see the meat,the experimentor ring the bell and then show the meet to the dog for 100 times ,the dog slobber after catching sight of the meat.But at the 101 times the experimentor only ring the bell but not show the meat and they find out the dog will slobber as well. It tells us how the dog learns .As same as the dog, We also learn from our experience. Therefore,the past is a book full of our experience, we build our knowledge and gain the wisdom from it,undoubtly ,we call use these experience to solve the problem present or futural.
Secondly,the past consist of not only our own experience,but also the others.If we can see our forefathers as a mirror ,we will make correct decisions,then gain the character as we admire ,finally, become the person we want to be.On the one hand ,if we achieve this successfully,it will save our time and energy.On the other hand ,if we reject to learn from our predecessor or people who already did what we are going to do ,it's possible that we will be confused about the various choice and miss ourself because of the seduction.
Last but not least,we can predict the future by past.There's a saying"Life is like a box of chocolate,you'll never know what you are gonna get",definetly ,to translate this sentence in my words is that tomorrow is unknown.we will never know the consequence of something is happening,the future of us ,as well as the destiny of a country. Nevertheless,we can guess it from reviewing the history.I believe that there are not so many news ,the history are incredible similar. For instance,the trend of the stock remains semblable. That is to say ,we can check in the history when we analyse the future or get into the frustration currently.It can probably make it easier for us to find the solution .
To draw my conclusion,I'd like to mention a saying from Fransis Bacon "Reading history makes man wise".We can benifit from our past experience and find approach to deal with the present or futural issue.
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Sentence: I believe that there are not so many news, the history are incredible similar.
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Sentence: People's behavior varies confronting of difficuties, some make choice according to the sixth sense, however, the others listen to the history.
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Sentence: Therefore, the past is a book full of our experience, we build our knowledge and gain the wisdom from it, undoubtly, we call use these experience to solve the problem present or futural.
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Sentence: There's a saying Life is like a box of chocolate, you'll never know what you are gonna get, definetly, to translate this sentence in my words is that tomorrow is unknown.
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Sentence: We can benifit from our past experience and find approach to deal with the present or futural issue.
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