A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where should this visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
In this statement given, the argument discusses the city for one day visitors. There are a lot of factors to choose a city how do you want to spend your time, for example swimming, dancing, shopping or see sighting. Visitors can choose one of them or maybe two or three of them. If I were the visitor in my country, absolutely I choose Istanbul. There are a lot of reasons why I choose Istanbul. I shall explain in the following paragraphs.
First, Istanbul is really a big city and the most crowded city in my country such as New York in USA or London in England. Its historical value is undeniable. It was the capital city of the most of Anatolian empire such as Ottoman and Byzantines. Furthermore, it has kept historical palaces, mosques, towers and bridges.
Second, Istanbul has a lot of natural beauties, such as islands, forests, and bosphorus. Everyone can visit one of islands or spend funny times in Belgrade forest inside of nature and another opportunity is a travel in bosphorus with a small ship. In my opinion, these are good opportunities to spend a day in Istanbul.
Third, Istanbul is a heaven for exotic buyers and gourmets. You can buy a lot of different special things in Istanbul such as carpets which one is from different areas in the world like Persia carpet or much more valuable jewelries and you can taste delicious meals, delights, and drinks such as kebab, baklava, and raki which ones are most famous.
Finally, if you are a nature or history lover or if you are someone who wants to find different taste, you will be happy in Istanbul. I guarantee that you want to come back and spend much more time in Istanbul. Istanbul is my favorite place in Turkey.
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The first paragraph is verbose. You can be more straight forward.
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