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House Hunting
After hard working day you come back home. Streets crowded with people and traffic noise just get on your nerves. You are hungry, awfully tired and it seems that the words of the famous song are written exactly for you: “I’m on my way, just set me free, home, sweet home…”. You want to reach your place as soon as possible to have your home-made dinner and relax. It is your place, your little corner in the world where you can manage all things as you want and it’s important to consider some aspects, such as location, size, style etc. while hunting it. For me the most important thing is...
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No. of Words: 462 350 (less words in real exams. write the essay in half an hour)
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Score: 26 out of 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 462 350
No. of Characters: 1964 1500
No. of Different Words: 208 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.636 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.251 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.348 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.366 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.311 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.508 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5