If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change?

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If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change?

There are many exciting cities in the world: Paris, London, Rome, but as Russian proverb says it is good to be visiting, but it is better at home. Yerevan is my city of birth, my home, sweet home. So, I can’t be indifferent to what happens here or what people do with it. I would like to change lots of things about it, but the most important of them is the current policy of authorities concerning the Yerevan old buildings. In recent years about thirty old buildings were destroyed in order to build new ones in their places. Authorities should find other solutions rather than destroying these b...

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