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It is important to keep your old friends than to make new friends
"Does an individual make friends for the sake of a relationship?" according to me the answer of the question is affirmatively, 'no". According to my perspective, Importance of friendship depends upon person's priority. So , the answer of this question will vary from person to person, But for me, Old friends are like old treasure, whose value increases after certain time. This essay, will discuss on the issue related with old and new friends and it's importance in once life.
Firstly, it is important to keep old friend, because they will remain same as they were used to be. one recent study...
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Sentence: This essay, will discuss on the issue related with old and new friends and it's importance in once life.
Description: The fragment in once life is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace once with adjective
in this study researcher have taken demographic data of students of
in this study researchers have taken demographic data of students of
She is well known TV anchor
She is a well known TV anchor
She still remember me
She still remembers me
But it is very hard task to find a friend
But it is a very hard task to find a friend
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No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 408 350
No. of Characters: 1943 1500
No. of Different Words: 217 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.494 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.762 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.654 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.609 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.55 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.299 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.512 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.203 0.07
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