A person should never make an important decision alone.

In the statement given, the author is discussing whether it is good to make an important decision alone or not. Decision-making is an important process because it could effects our whole life. Some people prefer to make decisions by themselves, while some may not. From my point of view, it is always better to make an important decision with people who we trust and respect. I shall explain my own reasons in the following paragraphs.

A person should make an important decision after asking other people’s opinions, because sometimes we cannot see a situation from different perspectives, and ...

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Sentence: Decision-making is an important process because it could effects our whole life.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to could and effects

Sentence: For instance if we decided to live in another city, we could decide alone, by searching internet or books, but if we ask a friend who lives there he can analyses pros and cons better than any book.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to can and analyses

Sentence: We could listen them or not, it is up to us, but if we really care about them we should pay attention their ideas as much as ours.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: pay attention on sth.

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