Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parent generation? Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
Life is changes all the time and with that change, people and their habits are also change. This is the reason why we, and our families have some differences in our lives. We have different difficulties, interests, and it directly influences our behaviors. I shall explain in the following paragraphs.
The first thing is working habits. With technological development, machines started to use in factories, rather than humans. Before my generation, people had to wake up earlier and work harder than us, because they used to work with their bodies. Now, machines and robots do the physical part o...
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