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Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower place. Which do you prefer?
People have various characters and sometimes get use to being in a specific mood. Some people prefer to be calm and take their time. On contrary, some people prefer to be in a hurry and all the time they are under pressure of doing something. In my view point, that depends on their characters formed by their attitudes and it is, however, related to their habits. As far as I’ve known myself, if I am be relaxed for a rather long time, I will be worried about all of my work which should have been done and was left undone. Therefore, I would prefer to follow my works and get involved myself in d...
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Sentence: I can definitely mention that I prefer to busy with working even in the hard situation, because I have the big idea and want to a successful one.
Description: The word busy is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to busy
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.793 21.0
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 29 15
No. of Words: 487 350
No. of Characters: 2084 1500
No. of Different Words: 206 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.698 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.279 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.306 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.793 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.546 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.483 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.285 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.453 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.096 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5