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Should pets be treated as family members?
In my opinion, pets should not be treated like family members. There are several reasons why I would like to differentiate pets with my family members.
Firstly, they are not humans. What I mean, when I say that they are not humans is that they have different requirements than humans. One needs to instruct them all the time. They are always dependent on their owner even if they grow old. We can not simply take them to our relatives or friends on our visit. The relatives and friends may not like pets. Some are even alergic to pet-animals. We may be risking our relationship that we have with r...
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