People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
According to me, music plays pivotal role in anyone's life. People do listen differnt types of music as per the occasion and as per their moods. We could listen and see many categories in music all over the world. There are classical music, rock music, pop music, jazz music, folk music, spiritual music and many more. Music is the medium to show your emotions. People listen to music to change their mood, we could say music is a stress reliver.
The good point about music is that now a days its a good way for being entertained. People create many differnt music. Sometimes to entertain, to motivate, to advertise, to publisity. People at every age fond of listening music in every time. Many musics have been creating evry day for evry age of group. In this hectic world people spend most of the time on their working, they really need relaxation. Even when my friend are in office in break they put their headphones and start listening to music. So they can distance their self from work for a while and relax their mind. It really helps to boost their engry and to start their work qiuckly.
Now a days some people are very attached and connect with music. By this what I ment for some people music is a source of money. People write songs, create music for songs and earn money. Many people are finding job in this way. This is also a good way to improve our skills, and find a job in our hobby.
To sum up, more than thousands of languages are there, but music is the only language which connets the one county to another country, one people to another people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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...ngry and to start their work qiuckly. Now a days some people are very attached...
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... skills, and find a job in our hobby. To sum up, more than thousands of langua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47386759582 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11442283175 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1478692114 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.1428571429 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04761904762 5.45110844103 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337767070877 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121053019471 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791338833872 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202044179264 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816688696909 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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