People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Music is a soundtrack of our life. It becomes an inseparable aspect of human life. Therefore, we can see a lot of online streaming music provider and cutting-edge song in radio every day. In fact, every individual posses a radio adhere in their car or in the form of a boom box. Additionally, Music develops and sometimes it defines the decade. We can hear that 80’s is Elvis Presley time or millennium is a mark by backstreet boys songs. I believe that music is ineluctable because three reasons that I would like to elaborate in the next paragraph.
First, music gives theme song for a moment in human life. It subsumes every occasion and every atmosphere. If you feel despondent, you can hear a dulcet song. If you feel indecorous then you can listen to a buoyant tune. In fact, there are more songs than the human population. Furthermore, it becomes paramount in this millennial lifestyle. For example, when I was forlorn, I listened to Adele song so I could cry my heart out. After that, I felt lighter and ready to move on. That is enormous power to have.
Second, music energizes people. We can see that everyone put his or her headphones in the gym; it stimulates the runner, the athlete and gives appropriate mind set for the yoga practitioner. It affects mood hence it makes body reacts differently. For instance, if I put an upbeat song, I can run faster just to synchronize with the song rhythm. It becomes imperative because music accompanies people to do their job.
Lastly, Music is a form of communication. It is an established art medium since the ancient time. It uses for people to confess love, to declare war, or even to say goodbye. The music contains lyrics and tunes that apt with the occasion, therefore, it is highly dynamic language. In my experience, I used music to confessed my love because I embarrassed to told him directly. Not only I was accepted, he also thought that is romantic.
Ultimately, music is unexchangeable. It is an essential and involves at every aspect of human life. All things considered, music very important for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...despondent, you can hear a dulcet song. If you feel indecorous then you can listen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, second, so, then, therefore, as for, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78453038674 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86073698945 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574585635359 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3247830236 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.7333333333 100.406767564 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0666666667 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.88709677419 368% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204284071064 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513465432729 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530719747891 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119423502041 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372648672386 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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