Sometimes an event that seems to be going badly turns out well after all .describe such an event in your life.
Well we human beings encounter many events in our lives. If I have to make a distinct choice I would talk about the accident that happened tow years ago .
one day when I was driving , a car crash with my car suddenly and heated my car very bad. it needed a very expensive repair and I broke my leg. That was a very bad disaster to me because at that time I was going to the interview for getting a very accredited job in my field and I had to be there punctual. being punctual and punctuality was very respected and valued with interviewer .so I could not arrive there on time and they thought that it is one of my feature so they did not accept me despite all my apologize .
but that event was not a very bad to me it have had a good consequence, I have found a new friend at the same age . I have found that we have the same view ,mentality ,attitude toward life and personality . We have found that we have more like minded and mutual understanding and she was a good girl with good upbringing and personality . I feel close to her day by day and generally speaking I can say I have found a beautiful sister . I treasure her like a rare gem and I have a deep respect for her .last but not least ,I have to say that we should not decide in a hurry we should have patience and ponder in a solace. If I was making a very bad decision I could not find someone like my sister to rely on in my life and my life would be full of stresses and sadness .
I believe that you can change your destiny you can change your life with your mind and you can change it from sadness event to happiness event .so ventilate your mind and think carefully and it is important to calm down when you are in a trouble.
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- Sometimes an event that seems to be going badly turns out well after all describe such an event in your life 91
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