The teacher assigns a paper and says that you can either write it by yourself or with other students. Do you prefer to write it alone or with others? Why?
Writing a paper is a difficult task which at times can be undesirable, boring and detestable for me. To write a paper I’d surly prefer to write it with my friends or other students. I deeply and genuinely believe that different people have different talents, personalities, intelligences and characters. Writing a paper requires different skills such as finding facts, researching, surveying, interpretation, analysis statics, discussing and reporting facts. Moreover computer literacy, being technology savvy, having an analytic mind and familiarity with word processing are some of the things required to write a valuable and sound paper.
I believe that “No man is an island “. We can perfect each other. Different people can supplement and complement each other. As the saying goes “two minds are better than one “and “it needs two to tango”.
Collaboration and cooperation, joint efforts and togetherness are some essential requirements of producing a sound and publishable paper.
Moreover if we’re left to ourselves, we relax, lay back and procrastinate but if we’re in the company of others, we’re under a certain level of pressure and we have to push ourselves harder and put all our potential to action.
All in all, I assert that working with others and contributing to each other might yield better results. I like working with others and when it comes to writing a paper I definitely rather to work in a group. I don’t like to be left to myself, to be left alone, to take on all the chores and responsibilities alone. Workings with others rejuvenates me and peps me up. I like writing a paper if I can help and get help leading to excellence, perfection and integrity.
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The paragraphs in the essay body is too short.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 284 350
No. of Characters: 1360 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.105 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.789 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.969 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.892 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.323 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.582 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5