In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
We cannot be sure about what will be happened in future precisely! But by my anticipation, future people will deplete fewer cars than they do today because of shortage of the petroleum fuel sources, Traffic problem, and pollution minatory.
There are numerous evidences that corroborate cars fuel will be declined very soon due to their paucity of sources. We know this fuel depends on the petroleum. Limited places on the earth are oil-bearing. There are lots of works that are related to this substance, so they will lead to finish the fuel soon. Nonetheless, there is some advice that by being thrifty we can postpone the finishing of the sources of this fuel, but by scientist prognostication it will at most up to twenty years. Therefore, we cannot account on this fuel, thus as it is one of the essential materials needed for starting car, utilizing car will be deduced. However sort of people think any fuel such as electric ones can replace it but I don’t think so.
By enhancing the population, we see easily that the roads aren’t capable to endure the traffic, so traffic is become one of the most remarkable problem today. People use cars to arrive to their destination quickly. By increasing traffic, it is possible cogently that the reverse of this plea will be happened. Besides, traffic will cause people caught in a tangle traffic, may feel haggard or even angry toward other drivers.
Due to impressing of air pollution on Ozone, future generations will be enforced to seriously consider the pollution quandaries and reduce consuming of almost every things causing pollution. Then they will be likely banned to use their own cars every moment they want. As a result of this respect, the tendency of people to buy cars undoubtedly would be diminished. By using public transportation such as bus and train instead, maybe they will handle this contamination.
Although, using cars specifically own car, people want to be convenient, but after a short time they will realize it threats the Ozone life by pollution and consequently world inhabitant life, so people should not negligible about these deleterious consequence events of using cars on the world. By utilizing public transportation more and fewer cars, try to overcome traffic and pollution and petroleum consumption.
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There is lots of work that related to this substance, so they will lead to finish the fuel soon.
There are lots of works that are related to this substance, so they will lead to finish the fuel soon.
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