We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.
In his book the great, Indian motivation speaker and author Shivkehra, has written about a study, which took place Harvard university. According to that study, when a person works among the people having positive attitude his productivity increases by 2-3 times, whereas when a person works among the people having negative angry attitude the productivity of person reduces by the one third to one fifth. Well, I will prefer to work in a company where the people have positive, fun loving and friendly attitude, because of several reasons.
First of all, If my co-workers will be having a positive attitude than it will be easy for me to adjust into the environment of the company when I will be joining it as a fresher. Working in a positive environment will make me feel good and thereby improving my productivity.
Secondly, If my co-workers will be friendly in nature than I will be able to make friends among them. They will co-operate with me when I will need them. The friendly attitude of the people in the company will help me to getting my doubt solved quickly and easily by my seniors. I will not be feeling alone while working in the company. In this kind of environment, I will always be having a feel as if I am not working in a company, rather I am working in a family and all the people in the company are like my family members and all of the family members are working to improve the status of company.
Finally, I will like to have my co-workers who are fun loving, enjoying and even adventures. Because I always believe that without fun this life will be dull. Enjoyment is a vital part of my life. I will highly appreciate, if my co-workers will be going on adventures trips like trekking on a hill on weekends. This will help me remain close to the nature, which I always appreciate.
In summery, I will like to have my co-workers who have a positive attitude, who are friendly, fun loving and adventures in nature. This kind of people will pave me a way to reach zenith. The positive environment of the company will have for me a whirl of success saga yet to be written.
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Sentence: In summery, I will like to have my co-workers who have a positive attitude, who are friendly, fun loving and adventures in nature.
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