TPO 07 - Question 1 If friends from another country were going to spend time in your country, what city or place would you suggest they visit? Using details and examples, explain why.

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two issues:

1. there are duplicated contents, like: 'if my friends....', 'so taking my friends there...'

better not to make 'if' clauses in speaking.

2. you only talk in 43 seconds. need to talk more.

Since the first sentence is 'if' clause, we don't need to make any if conditions again, which will duplicate the content.

what you do:
1. remove that if clause
2. make one more sentence

The conclusion == advantages of the reason

for example, in the first reason, we may say : ... my friend will get whatever books she wants for sure (advantage 1); and the books will enrich her knowledge about my country's customs, cultures, histories ...(advantage 2)