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Education is of great importance; not only does it provide people with better outlooks over life but it also provides essential make a significant leap in achieving my goal.
The characteristic which I take pride in the most is my self-discipline. I am always highly motivated and commited in everything I do. In every occasion, I always set up high targets with a detailed plan that artepping-stone with which I proceeded onto the exploration of other soBusiness Adminstration at university. On enterring the National University Entrance Exam to Foreign Trade University, I eventually achieved the third highest score in Group A1 and ahs-related and Management subjects.
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I have managed to devote some of my time for voluntary activities as well. One important aspect of my character is that I love helping people; I engaged in Spring Volunteer Campaign within my communitygeunse from the book of second John in the bible says: “Look to yourselves that we do not lose those things we worked for, but that we may receive a full reward”. I want to receive what is available to me.
All in all, a careful investigation has informed me that your university is a leading university, featuring an education systdvanced knowledge in the field in your department and the kind of knowledge that I exploit to promote the development of Vietnam’s own expertise.
All in all, a careful investigation has informed me that your university is a leading university, featuring an education systdvanced knowledge in the field in your department and the kind of knowledge that I exploit to promote the development of Vietnam’s own expertise.
All in all, a careful investigation has informed me that your university is a leading university, featuring an education systdvanced knowledge in the field in your department and the kind of knowledge that I exploit to promote the development of Vietnam’s own expertise.
All in all, a careful investigation has informed me that your university is a leading university, featuring an education systdvanced knowledge in the field in your department and the kind of knowledge that I exploit to promote the development of Vietnam’s own expertise.
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Sentence: I am always highly motivated and commited in everything I do.
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Sentence: Upon entering High school for the gifted, the most prestigious and best-ranked schools in Vietnam, I once again embarked on my journey of natural science.
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Sentence: My exeptionally solid foundation in secondary school provided me with a stepping-stone with which I proceeded onto the exploration of other sophisticated and erudite subjects.
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Sentence: My performance in all the specialty-related coursework not only enabled me to secure good GPA ranking in my class but also furnished me with a powerful instrument whereby to materialise my dream in the research.
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Sentence: In the stage of taking care, self-discipline plays an important role since we ourselves are the ones who design our own destiny.
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Sentence: During the one-year period of working hard, I always followed my plans and pushed myself harder to make quick progress.
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Sentence: On enterring the National University Entrance Exam to Foreign Trade University, I eventually achieved the third highest score in Group A1 and also in top 50 students in Group D1.
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Sentence: During the two-year period in university, I also got a position of top 5 percent in my class.
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Sentence: The project taught me a lot of principal skills in management, teamwork as well as precious experiences in carrying and analyzing a research.
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Sentence: Further and even more imprtantly, though the very first time I tried real leader position, I easily got things running organized and smoothly with good results.
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Sentence: All in all, a careful investigation has informed me that your university is a leading university, featuring an education system and research atmostphere and boasting a number of accomplished professors whose academic attainments are also better.
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.513 4.7
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 125 20
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
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