These days, a great emphasis has been put on raising children. Therefore, the idea has risen that believes it should be compulsory for parents to attend childcare training classes. While there are both benefits and drawbacks connected with this trend, I strenuously agree that it is an advantageous practice.
On the one hand, there are a few disadvantages which are as follows. Firstly, it disregards the benefits of trial and error. Parents gain new skills through mistakes they have made and learn to correct them accordingly. For instance, practicing to change diapers and finding the flaws in a real situation is more educational than reading theoretical books in some class. Secondly, it teaches parents to employ methods that are developed to be applied to all children; whereas, many children need special care. Take an autistic adolescent as an example. It is scarcely possible that a course can adequately prepare and teach parents to take care of a kid with such a disorder.
On the other hand, there are a plethora of prominent advantages that cannot be ignored. First and perhaps the most important benefit is that by taking these courses many hazards can be avoided. Everybody knows that children are compromised by dangers, by taking childcare classes, Parents can learn how to prevent irreversible accidents such as falling and burning from happening to their offspring. Moreover, these courses teach parents to utilize proven scientific methods when it comes to controlling children; consequently, negative behavioral outcomes are minimized. For example, if a child is not abiding by the house rules and needs to be punished, childcare training teaches parents how to respond properly so the child is not psychologically affected.
To conclude, on the basis of the aforementioned explanations, I strongly believe the merits of taking childcare training courses outweigh the demerits to a degree that it should be obligatory for all parents.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30448717949 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94224310024 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1275595325 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23872766557 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687366789375 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918698712083 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17783183908 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994038524694 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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