Children are the pillar of our societies and their upbringing has a significant effect on their own future as well as the country. Hence, the question raises as where is the best place for raising them. While some people think metropolitan areas are more suitable for them to be reared, others believe rural areas are better. In this essay, the benefits and drawbacks of both mentioned views are comprehensively investigated.
The defenders of raising children in the countryside argue the availability of vast space in these parts helps children to exhaust their energy. Moreover, the countryside is less polluted, which in contrast to the cities, creates a healthier environment for a child to grow up. However, although the aforementioned advantages are important, seemingly making the countryside the best place in view of many people for raising their offspring, there are drawbacks as well. These parts are less populated; thus, there is a fewer number of educational and sporting facilities. Furthermore, the infrastructure of the countryside, namely roads, are less developed, making it harder for children to commute between school and home.
On the other side of the argument lies the opposition’s viewpoint- the viewpoint that believes cities are better to raise children. They convincingly explain there are more opportunities for developing children’s skills due to abundant availability of different educational courses in the city. For example, if a child shows talent in music, there are many classes that teach playing different musical instruments. Conversely, there are disadvantages that are related to city life. The first and perhaps the most downside is the pollution which jeopardizes public health including children’s wellbeing with serious ailments. Another disadvantage is the higher chance of accidents caused by increasing number of vehicles in crowded cities, which can also compromise the little one's safety.
All in all, it can be concluded that there are many advantages and disadvantages to both city and countryside living. Cities are more developed and have more opportunity for children to enhance their skills, while, living in the countryside in healthier in general. In the end, it is up to one’s preference to choose between them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in contrast, in general, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50282485876 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15071429086 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553672316384 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8551744864 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340758313621 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864884102769 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669483343848 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188630683934 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349904817395 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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