The diagram below shows what an office building looks at present and plans on future development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates a schematic of how an office building looks in current time and some changes in the future. Overall, the building remains its original size with some changes to the facilities such as the office. Additionally, unused spaces, like grass area, are planned to have some renovations.
At the present, all of the office are placed close to the entrance, while the kitchen, canteen and stock room are on the upper side of the first diagram. However, on the lower diagram, the kitchen and canteen will be removed to make space for bigger offices. The reception will also be moved to between two offices at the lower side of the second diagram. It is also worth noting that the number of offices and stock room remained unchanged between two diagrams.
The grass area on the right side will be removed and turned into a meeting room. Additionally, the WC, which originally is next to the stock room in the middle section of the first diagram, will be moved to the upper right corner of the second diagram. The grass area on the left side of the diagram will become an outdoor seating area. Furthermore, the stock room stayed the same between the development, with an addition of a coffee machine right above in the the second diagram.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 17, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...have some renovations. At the present, all of the office are placed close to the entrance...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...tion of a coffee machine right above in the the second diagram.
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...tion of a coffee machine right above in the the second diagram.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, look, second, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72146118721 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42485960857 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497716894977 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1309383688 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151070478517 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648374852046 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457543929493 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105690756286 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278106131619 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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