Topic: The chart below shows the number of people employed in five types of work in one region of Australia in 2001 and 2008.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the figure for inhabitants hired in five departments in a typical company recorded in one region of Australia between 2001 and 2008.
In general, it is apparent that in both years, the Sales sectors attracted the highest number of employees as well as showed an increase in the figure. In addition, both the computing and nursing sectors followed the same trend as the Sales sector, whereas the converse was true in terms of the Accounting and Farming types of work.
Looking at the chart, the Sales department acquired the most prominent staff, accounting for roughly 160.000 staff in 2001. Subsequently, there was a substantial rise in the number of candidates employed in 2008 around 170.000. In the fields of Computing and Nursing, both witnessed an increased trend in the number. While the computing sector demonstrated significant growth from 60.000 to 80.000, the other sector only experienced a slight surge between 2001 and 2008.
Turning to the other sectors, both Accounting and Farming types of employment decreased in the number of people employed in the examined period. Although the Accounting sector witnessed a cut down on employees, Farming depicted a dramatic plummet in the figure, only making up merely half the number of employment compared to the first mentioned year.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...tracted the highest number of employees as well as showed an increase in the figure. In ad...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, well, whereas, while, in addition, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23943661972 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75320791978 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572769953052 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5010287912 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19781511962 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830852223072 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535093766031 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124546187857 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498562743771 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...tracted the highest number of employees as well as showed an increase in the figure. In ad...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, well, whereas, while, in addition, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23943661972 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75320791978 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572769953052 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5010287912 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19781511962 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830852223072 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535093766031 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124546187857 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498562743771 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.