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The purpose of businesses is to make money and they should concentrate only on this. Do you agree or disagree?
The rapid development of industrialization has raised great concerns about the role of business. While some people believe that making money, which is the purpose of business, should be the only target. However, I strongly disagree with this point of view. I reckon that businesses have social and environmental responsibilities beyond generating profits.
Undeniably, earning profit is a core purpose for the survival and growth of any business. In fact, businessmen need a huge amount of money to invest in running costs and other expenditures such as employee’s monthly salaries, maintenance, as well as innovation and investment to catch up with the increasing demand of the market. However, focusing exclusively on financial gain can lead to negative consequences such as worker exploitation, environmental degradation, and unethical practices. For instance, companies that prioritize profits over everything else might resort to cutting costs by ignoring safety standards or underpaying employees.
Besides making money, companies must take social and environmental responsibilities as well as customer services into consideration in the long term. Firstly, exceptional customer service is essential for building trust and loyalty. A business that provides good quality products and treats its customers with respect, responds to their needs, and solves problems efficiently is more likely to retain those customers. This leads to repeat purchases, positive word-of-mouth, and a strong brand reputation. Secondly , by contributing positively to society, businesses can build stronger connections with customers. For example, firms that adopt eco-friendly practices or support local communities are more likely to be trusted and supported by the public. Therefore, integrating social and environmental goals with financial objectives is not only ethical but also beneficial for business sustainability.
In conclusion, while making money is a fundamental aim of businesses, it should not be their only focus. Companies must balance profit-making with social and environmental responsibilities in order to thrive in the long term and contribute to a better society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90793650794 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40194877797 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6305867467 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.470588235 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164777398468 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536262835406 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611025974853 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113960710163 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634432250377 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.