Some people store personal and private information online, including banking, contacts and addresses. Is it a positive or negative trend?
More and more people are approval of the advent of online storage, as a result, they tend to take advantage of this feature to achieve their personal information such as bank account, contacts, and addresses. From a personal point of view, this trend brings more benefits than drawbacks for a host of reasons.
The first advantage of storing private information online is about safety. Every source of information, especially private ones, mostly needs a passcode to register. This code only allows the owners of the information or authorized people to use the source. Furthermore, in the worst situation that the source is stolen, the owners still can reset it by providing their possession. For example, 2 months ago, my uncle forgot the password of his bank account, but then he showed his phone and passport number which he used for registration, ultimately, he could successfully retrieve his account.
Secondly, another benefit of online storage is that the perfect maintenance of private information. It is different from paper-based documents, which can be damaged anytime by fire or water, the storing process only needs virtual memory from online platforms, which might reserve the data for thousands of years. For example, in Japan, tsunami appears rampantly and unpredictably, therefore, when this disaster comes, the top priority is to save lives, not paper documents. As a result, storing personal data online is the most feasible choice.
In conclusion, online storages have their own advantages which persuade an increasing number of people to use them. Personally, I suppose that this is a positive development because of the aforementioned explanations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35227272727 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92949510579 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6428496913 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22136902754 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082636839568 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670698502892 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125505409998 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255129928022 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.