In recent years, a growing trend towards maintaining youthful looks has arisen among middle-age people, regardless of gender, in many countries. Although the causes associated with this trend can be pronounced, it brings about many positive changes overall.
There are certain reasons why people wish to look younger. First, in order to enhance their self-image, they have chosen to live up to society’s beauty expectations. In fact, recent evidence suggests that younger and attractive employees often rank higher in competence and credibility, which directly correlates with their successful career. In addition, the standard of beauty defined by media portrayals can influence the public’s perception. For example, by looking up to cover girls, middle-aged women would be filled with insecurities, rendering them more conscious about their looks, which forces them to appear gorgeous in front of others.
Besides, the attempts to sustain youthful looks can be seen as positive. First, as fitness and sport facilities come into play, citizens tend to get more serious about physical activities, which inevitably slows down the aging process. For instance, plenty of evidence suggests that actively engaging in exercises can boost the metabolism rate, allowing these citizens to appear younger. Second, higher intake of healthy foods and drinks, such as vegetables or green tea, can prevent people from chronic illnesses associated with aging, especially obesity and diabetes. It can be implied that those deciding to keep a healthy eating diet will have younger looks, which is conducive to higher life expectancy.
In conclusion, the effort to maintain younger appearance is highly justified by its positive impact on the society. Individuals should take steps to better enhance their beauty in order to have a meaningful and fulfilling lives.
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- Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be and to look the same.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? 86
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, look, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62411347518 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79496518598 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656028368794 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4293478184 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135535863201 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506172440695 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543278977371 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798992693674 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257198410794 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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