Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to.

Many people argue that success of an individual depends upon the environment in which he or she has grown up. However, in my opinion, native place’s environment is only one factor and a person’s attitude, capability and determination also play a pivotal role in achieving success.

Native environment plays a detrimental role in inculcating traits such as leadership, social skills etc. These qualities an individual acquires over a period of time. The behaviour of people in a neighborhood, school friends and college friends significantly affects behaviour and skills of a person. For instance, Mahatma Gandhi a famous Indian leader received most of his leadership skills from people with whom he spent his childhood time.People around us inspires us every day which motivates us to become a good person in society.

On the other hand, it is not only native environment that is responsible for development of an individual and his success. After an individual moves out from his native place to some other place for work he tends to learn new things that he was not aware about at his home place. Moving to other places introduces an individual to new ideas and new ways of doing things. It allows a person to thing in a broad perspective and this open-minded thinking plays a vital role in a person’s success. For example, Dhirubhai Ambani a famous Indian businessman achieved all his success only after leaving his native land. While moving to different places he learnt different people and various skills which he was not aware of at his native place. And these new learning helped him rule the business world.

To conclude, just native environment may not be behind an individual’s success. There are a lot of other factors that take an individual towards success. we just need to push extra mile to overcome any hurdles towards lucrative jobs.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 309.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09385113269 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93636492614 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4764245837 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188712699129 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659485269218 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558716017724 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123877406005 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483072062753 0.0609392437508 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Packages products can be found in our daily lives, some may have it more than others. While the reason can be different, this overuse of material is far from ended. Some people would argue that consumers should avoid it while others pointing fingers as producer responsibility. It is felt that producers should play a more pivotal role in this situation, especially with the growing range of products found in society these days.

To commence with, producers use packaging to deliver their product to customers and to keep it in a good condition. It can be seen as necessary to reduce their packaging content, as this would lead in reducing cost. For example, fast food companies like McDonalds have been using a less plastic bag for their takeaway meal. This has reduced their costs by a staggering 30% compared to the year before. As a result, by diminishing their material, companies can actually save substantial money from this activity.

Furthermore, manufacturers can reduce their carbon footprint by using recycled material. To cite an example, local milk factory Meiji has been using a recycled cartoon in their packaging. A positive benefit from using recycled material is how it can reduce environmental waste by 15% when compared to a non-recycled material. This example can show how companies have a direct influence in going green.

In recapitulation, after analysing both aspects of benefit, it is felt strong that manufacturers have more responsibility in reducing container. It is hoped that someday all companies would understand the liability and negative aspect from over using material container.