Nowadays people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss
It is irrefutable to say that, work palace seeks more time of people for more economy than they are willing to spend time with family members and taking care of themselves. While the question is, whether spending much time at work is hampering their personal life or they are benefitting. In my opinion, spending too much of time at work is disturbing ones personal life which will be discussed and deduced to a conclusion in this essay.
To begin with, increase of competition in work place between peers has caused people to perform better in their jobs, thus increase in the time at work rather than at home. This trend has increased conflict in families and has lead to the rocketed number of divorces in the societies. For instance, according to article published in the New York Times, the number people wanting to life alone has increased to 65 percent in last decade.
Another reason people spending time at work might be the social competitions to be the best in whatever one does. In the race to become more successful, people these days have forgot to take care of themselves. Having no time for themselves and this rat race to success has lead to many heath problems in individuals. According to World Health Organization, the number of suicide, depression, and myriad other mental and psychological diseases has in last decade.
To recapitulate, need of this era is having good life and for the propitious of their life, people work very hard to earn money not caring about the personal life as well which is causing high level of psychological stress in individuals. So, having a balance between work and personal life is necessary for long life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...more successful, people these days have forgot to take care of themselves. Having no t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64590841423 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534965034965 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6069572174 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.519224429916 0.244688304435 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181719930963 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122998529647 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29983188705 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13221689342 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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