Groups or organizations are an important part of some people’s lives. Why are groups or organizations important to people? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Groups and organizations have always constituted a significant part of a society. These entities provide support to people in various ways. From my point of view, organizations are important due to the fact that they fight for human rights and even for more. I will explain my statement, in detail, in the following essay.
First and foremost, organizations can offer people support in many domains. Generally, their mission is to defend the human rights, to help people who are in need, sick, to fight against corruption, pollution, cruelty against other species and so forth. Moreover it is a method to bring people together, to unite them, to make people work in teams in order to create a better future. Not to mention that non-profit organization arrange raise funds in order to assist the aforementioned categories. For example, back in high school, one of my colleagues discovered that he was suffering from leukemia. The treatment was extremely expensive and his relatives did not have enough income to pay for it. Then, we decided that we could not stay and watch how he was dying. We collaborated with two organizations and started a campaign for raising the money. Luckily, our move was successful and we were able to raise the necessary amount of money. Therefore, we can say we were a part of an organization, and that we participated to its mission. It helped us to understand that oneness is essential for surviving difficult times.
To continue with, groups does offer moral support too. At present time, people live at a rapid pace. They are under the pressure of daily problems and responsibilities, and ignore the importance of mental health. Furthermore, neither individuals nor other medical institutions, think about how daily stress affects the insanity of a person. Fortunately, there are groups that are opened to address this topic, that are willing to offer therapeutic assistance for those who face mental issues. For instance, I was reading about an organization called Man Kind Project, a few days ago. Its purpose is to help people who are in depression caused by different reasons such as sexual orientation, discrimination, physical appearance and so on. As far as I understood, it promotes equality between people and they call each other "brothers" and "sisters". I read many stories of people who attended this group and the members considered it as a new family, full with unconditional compassion and love. Thus, such groups are beneficial for those who need this kind of assistance.
To summarize, organizations and groups represent vital elements for the present society. This is because they are defenders of humans rights and because they have the capacity to help people both from financial and moral point of view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...lty against other species and so forth. Moreover it is a method to bring people together...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2334.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.140969163 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08900424943 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559471365639 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6232250387 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8148148148 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85185185185 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257155823726 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646705835753 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498659638368 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16345821168 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514620831064 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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